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I miss my dad
And the rainbows
That drift behind him.
Rainbows of words,
Beautiful imaginings,
His life of ethereal fantasy.

I miss my dad
And our easy laughter
Echoing like bronze bells.
When we are together,
Our humour bubbles over
Like a fountain of glittering diamond.

I miss my dad
The dreamer,
Part of the one percent
That doesn’t fit but does care.
I know I can still see him
But sometimes
Just sometimes
I miss my wonderful dreamer
Bringer of smiling rainbows,
With laughter like bronze bells.
i was missing dad alot when i wrote this.
i still see him now and then..but he lives far away and that makes me sad every now and then
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:iconkim1015:
kim1015 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
well i miss my dad too, but he is now in another world
mmm i like what u write :DD
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Yourockmysoxoff Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2005
That's sad. btu its really pretty, Last christmas, my dad took all of my christmas presesnts away, and sold them on eabay, and then he left...again. later that night, he told my mom my bro was on drugs (not true), six months later, after no word at all, he says he has to go to iraq, which was a lie, and now i don't know where he lives...I think He's in The US, but he may be in europe. I still miss him a lot too, btu my bro calls me a coward. I know how you feel.

Anyway, this was truely a wonderful piece
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thats terrible. god thats awful...
if you need to talk or anything you can talk to me ok? i know that i dont know you and vice versa, but if you ever need to talk or anything im here.
why does your bro call you a coward?
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ezzen16 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2005   Writer
how gorgeous!!
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:iconangelicphantom:
AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:) wow, you really did go and review heaps of my stuff :D thank you thank you thank you
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ezzen16 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005   Writer
lol yeah i did, im still goin thru it too lol!! :hug: and its fine i love lookin thru wat otha ppl rite and stuff so yeah, my pleasure
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ezzen16 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005   Writer
lol yeah i did, im still goin thru it too lol!! :hug: and its fine i love lookin thru wat otha ppl rite and stuff so yeah, my pleasure
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Yoorion Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2005
T.T I thought of my grandpa when I read this...beautiful love...absolutely positive beautiful...
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thank you my butterfly...thank you so much...
iv been missing my dad a bit lately.
im honored that you connect this with your grandpa...i know how much he meant to you my love :hug:
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Yoorion Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2005
-smiles gently-
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
-smiles back and holds you tight-
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:iconyoorion:
Yoorion Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005
-kisses tenderly-
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Mechanical-Laughter Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005
:lovefav: I have to fave this one! It's really sweet! I love it! Yet another brilliant job!
Catchya ;)
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :) make me smile why dontcha
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Mechanical-Laughter Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005
:D Well why not? ;)
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
lmao i wouldnt have a clue...:lmao: :confused:
you wouldnt by any chance be a smartass would you?
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Mechanical-Laughter Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005
Define smartass
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
someone who can sit on icecream and tell you what flavour it is (badoom chish) :D :lmao:
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Mechanical-Laughter Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2005
Haha, Nice!
But I'm afraid I do not qualify as a smart ass
As my ass has not yet developed taste buds nor anything of the sort... : D Catchya
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
lol Hokey Pokey. i am a true smartarse....
lmao Luke...use the force...may the force be behind you...
go on try it...im sure you could be a fully fledged smartass if you tried :D
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Mechanical-Laughter Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005
:+favlove: damn... didn't work...
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Lieta Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2005
I like it especially the line "Part of the one percent, that doesn’t fit but does care." It gives him a bit of humanity in the fantasy-like words. Its very poetic and beautiful. Good job.
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
its from a poem that dad wrote called the one perceter. its an awesome. i though i should add some of his work in there somehow.
i can note you the full poem if you'd like...
hey and do you think i should ever post some of his just to get it out there? iv been thinking of it...but im not sure
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Lieta Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005
Sure i'd like to see it, and yea i think that it would be cool of you to post his work.
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
yay, thanx :) i'll note it too you soon as i can (though probably not today).
im just going to post my favs of his writing...coz hes done so much (ahem, two books).
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Lieta Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005
wow impressive, no hurry by the way
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goldenSalamander Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
He sounds wonderful. It sounds like you have a good relationship with him. Is he strong? I almost feel he might be a little fragile and vulnerable.

I love your imagery in:
drift behind.......rainbow of words
and
our easy laughter
Echoing like bronze bells.

Our humour bubbles over
Like a fountain of glittering diamond.
I especially liked that part. It's wonderful imagery.

I feel like I can almost see him, and almost know him.
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, we have a great relationship.
thank you so much for that incredible comment...
hey, im going to upload some of his poetry soon...some of his 'rainbow of words'. check them out...i love his work
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goldenSalamander Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
That's good. I was wondering if it were possible to move closer so you could see him more often and have that blessing in your life. Looking forward to his poetry. :wave:
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
i actually changed my mind...do you mind if i note you some of his stuff?
lol i could even send you a book if you wanted...
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goldenSalamander Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
Sure, note me some. That would be great. He has a book?
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
uhuh :) two in fact. the first is called Brainbows and the second is Poems from the Bin (you know...the rubbish bin, the loony bin...)
would you be interested in buying one? at the low price of only $10 :D
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goldenSalamander Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
Probably not right now, but I would love to read some more. I strongly suspect I would love to buy one of your books if you ever put one together. :D
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