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I miss my dad
And the rainbows
That drift behind him.
Rainbows of words,
Beautiful imaginings,
His life of ethereal fantasy.

I miss my dad
And our easy laughter
Echoing like bronze bells.
When we are together,
Our humour bubbles over
Like a fountain of glittering diamond.

I miss my dad
The dreamer,
Part of the one percent
That doesn’t fit but does care.
I know I can still see him
But sometimes
Just sometimes
I miss my wonderful dreamer
Bringer of smiling rainbows,
With laughter like bronze bells.
i was missing dad alot when i wrote this.
i still see him now and then..but he lives far away and that makes me sad every now and then
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kim1015 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
well i miss my dad too, but he is now in another world
mmm i like what u write :DD
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Yourockmysoxoff Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2005
That's sad. btu its really pretty, Last christmas, my dad took all of my christmas presesnts away, and sold them on eabay, and then he left...again. later that night, he told my mom my bro was on drugs (not true), six months later, after no word at all, he says he has to go to iraq, which was a lie, and now i don't know where he lives...I think He's in The US, but he may be in europe. I still miss him a lot too, btu my bro calls me a coward. I know how you feel.

Anyway, this was truely a wonderful piece
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thats terrible. god thats awful...
if you need to talk or anything you can talk to me ok? i know that i dont know you and vice versa, but if you ever need to talk or anything im here.
why does your bro call you a coward?
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ezzen16 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2005   Writer
how gorgeous!!
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:) wow, you really did go and review heaps of my stuff :D thank you thank you thank you
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ezzen16 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005   Writer
lol yeah i did, im still goin thru it too lol!! :hug: and its fine i love lookin thru wat otha ppl rite and stuff so yeah, my pleasure
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ezzen16 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005   Writer
lol yeah i did, im still goin thru it too lol!! :hug: and its fine i love lookin thru wat otha ppl rite and stuff so yeah, my pleasure
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Yoorion Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2005
T.T I thought of my grandpa when I read this...beautiful love...absolutely positive beautiful...
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AngelicPhantom Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thank you my butterfly...thank you so much...
iv been missing my dad a bit lately.
im honored that you connect this with your grandpa...i know how much he meant to you my love :hug:
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Yoorion Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2005
-smiles gently-
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